Feedback #1

Harry/Jamie/Andy,

This blog shows evidence of your ideas and discussion, however it is very messy and although your comments on each other's ideas can be informal, it is not appropriate to write in txt format - you need to go back through the blog, give each post a suitable title, punctuate properly and spellcheck, remove the "discussion" posts and instead cut and paste them into the comments sections and generally organise this so that it seems like an A2 piece of coursework.

Also - you still need to evaluate and comment on your moodboards (jamie - where is yours?). I can't see what your logic is at the moment in your response to the track.

Finally - you should have chosen your second textual analysis on the basis of the final chosen track. Be specific as to why that analysis would be useful. My other concern is that as a group, your textual analysis is not detailed enough for a level 4. You also need to include at least a link, if not an imbedded Youtube video of the video that you have analysed on the post.

At the moment, this is level 3 planning. Not all auteur research is present, it is a little disorganised and the individual research doesn't seem focused on your task. You must invest time in improving this.

Chosen track - I think this could be a very promising track, however with a lead female vocal, you would expect a female in the video... have you thought about this?